Dreamstar of Hopeclan

[dreamspirit/star]

Name: Dreamstar
Gender: Female
Age: 40 moons
Affiliation: Good
Rank: Leader
Clan: Hopeclan
Picture: Optional, a picture of your character

Description:

Provide a description of your character. Minimum 200 words, be as descriptive as possible. No crazy colored cats or powers.

Dreamstar is a small silver tabby she-cat with a long tail and long legs. She has a long narrow face long pointed ears and long whiskers. She has pale sky blue eyes and white paws as white as snow and the tip of her tail is also white. She has a graceful figure and her pelt shimmers in the moonlight. As a kit her paws were a little bit to big and she was always either tripping over her paws or tail. Her fur is sleek, and fluffy almost making her look like she still has her kit fur. She has a scar on one foreleg from where her dad tried tom train her to fight when she was four moons old. She has a hole in one ear where she got in a fight with a young dog.

Personality:

Describe your cats personality. Minimum 200 words.

Dreamstar is very brave and stubborn,she always stands by her word and isn't afraid to speak her mind, but sometimes this trait gets her in trouble. She tends to daydream alot, but you can't get a more loyal cat then she is. She doesn't think she's beautiful, so she doesn't think she'll ever get a mate, or have kits. She is pretty sensitive to others feelings, and always sees the best in every one np matter who they are. She always appears to be lost in thought, but is pretty smart and knows how to get out of a situation.nshe has a good sense of humor, but she is so serious about her duties, that she never has any fun, or jokes around.

History:

Describe your cats life up until present. Minimum 300 words for leaders, deputy, and medicine cats, kits may have 100 word minimum, everyone else 200 words.

She was born as a rouge, her parents named her Dream after her great grandmother. Her mother, Sky, and her dad, Blaze, never got along and were always fighting. One day when she was four moons old her dad was really angry and decided that he would try and teach her to fight, but he only ended up hurting her, and her mother chased him away and took her somewhere else. Then when she was seven moons old her father returned and attacked her mother. Her mother managed to kill him, bit was really wounded, so she traveled to the clans, and they were taken in. The medicine cat tried to save Sky, but her wounds were to great and she died, without even telling her daughter good bye. Dream was very sad and for a while she wouldn't talk to anyone. Then she decided it was time to move on and trained to be the best warrior she could be, and was soon rewarded as deputy of Hopeclan. Then she was soon made the leader, after her leader died of a case of black cough. Now, she is happily leading Hopeclan.

Role play sample:

Needed for high positions. You may fill this out if you want to though.

Dreamstar lay I'm her den and sighed, so much had happened since her mother had brought her here and died. She wished her mother was still alive, but no wishing on the world could bring her back. She shook her head, chasing away the memories that began to form in her mind and began to groom her fur. Then she stretched a d walked out of her den squinting at the strong sunlight. Then she walked over the the fresh kill pile choose a mouse and began eating it. When she had finished her meal she cleaned her muzzle and went for a walk in the forest, her mind going through memories about her past. She soon reached the river and lapped up some water before she headed back to camp and disappeared into her den.

Other: Anything else?

[Windpelt]

Not sure if this is done, but if so;

Description: needs around 60 more words.
Personality: around 80 words more.
History: another 100 words.

If not, just disregard this. c:

[dreamspirit/star]

Description continued: when she was a kit her paws seemed to be bigger than my kits and was always either tripping over her paws or her tail. As she got older she seemed to grow into her paws and grew out of her clumsy stage. One of her paws is a dark gray while the other three are the same color as her fur. Her claws are white instead of black, and they are long and hooked. The tips of her ears are also a dark gray, and so is the tip of her tail, which is slightly crooked from the time a dog grabbed it, it was the same dog that put the hole in her ear

Personality continued:
Even though Dreamstar is a
Ways trying to see the best in everyone, others think that she is really suspicious of others, because of the way she acts, but she is just really uptight, and that leads her to always look tense. She is sometimes stressed out, but that doesn't stop her from leading her clans. To others she seems mysterious since she won't talk about her past, and when her past is mentioned she gets mad, and takes a walk in the forest to think. She loves to help her clan mates with her problems, but not if it's a problem that the could figure out of their own. She loves kits, but as I said before doesn't think that she'll ever find a mate.

History continued:
Apprentice hood: when Dreamstar was an apprentice she always had nightmares about her mothers death. One night after waking up from another nightmare she went for a walk in the forest without telling anyone where she was going. As she made her way through the forest she heard a growling behind her, and spun around to come nose to nose with a small dog only a little bit bigger then her. Not knowing what else to do she ran, but the dog caught up to her and grabbed her by her tail and threw her into a tree, and then it bit a hole in her ear. Luckily for her a warrior had decided to follow her, and chased the dog off the territory, and took her to camp into the medicine den, where she stayed for a week while she recovered.

[RUNNINGLEAF]

I'm sorry but we aren't accepting leader bios at the moment. If you could, please change your cat to a warrior/deputy position. Thank you!

[dreamspirit/star]

Deputy for now I hate my life now

[RUNNINGLEAF]

Ok. I think we are going to have deputy auditions later this month if you would like to try out c:

[Blair ;;]

You know I think you can edit your post. . owo I'm just letting you know. If you're good enough I may accept this or have someone else do so. You MAY be able to be a leader if your bio is seen fit. I will edit your post into the description, if you'd like.

[Blair ;;]

I ALSO am very confused about something else. .


Well, you see, the parts you posted and wrote seem very different from the parts that were in the first post. Are you sure you wrote all of this on your own? If I find out you didn't, you'll be in real trouble with the admins. c: Thanks.