|
Post by gingerstripe on Jan 15, 2010 16:45:58 GMT -5
Name:gingerstripe Rank:med. cat Gender:girl Age:13 moons Looks: i am all a ginger Color except for the paws which are black. i have bright blue eyes that turn green when mad. i am short haired but my tail is long haired. the tip of my tail has very faint black on it. Personality:i have big attitude when mad and has a short fuse. gingerstripe wants only peace in the world. also love to run though leaves, but dislikes winters. i get cold very easily and love having others around.i am really fast learner, and will treat many sickness and wounds the best that i can. History:i was a playful kit,and hard working apprentice.i am nice to the leader.i have not been in many battles but wish that i will not see many.i have helped everyone in the clans i have been in.. (which was with other friend and not online). my mom died giving birth to me and my dad died in a battle after i was born. i really never knew my parents. Clan:desertclan
|
|
|
Post by RUNNINGLEAF on Jan 17, 2010 9:06:34 GMT -5
"Never knew my parents" shouldn't really go in looks and your sentences are confusing. Please use complaete sentences and punctuation.
|
|
|
Post by RUNNINGLEAF on Jan 17, 2010 14:16:05 GMT -5
Almost there. One more sentence in looks and It'll be accepted.
|
|
|
Post by RUNNINGLEAF on Jan 17, 2010 22:58:19 GMT -5
Accepted.
|
|