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Post by natalie on Mar 19, 2010 19:48:47 GMT -5
Name: Crystalpaw Rank: apprentice Gender: girl age: 6 moons Picture: www.innocentenglish.com/funny-pics/cute-puppy-kitten-pics/cute-gray-kitten.jpglooks:Light Gray with white paws and white whiskers. Pink nose. white tip on tail. Bright blue eyes. personality: mischeivous. quick witted. loves to run. friendly and loves life History: Has a habbit of getting in to mischief and going exploring when no ones looking. Very recently made an apprentice and is excited about sleeping in a new den. She will still snuggle up to her other 2 litter mates though. clan : Snow Clan Other: I want to have fun which I'm sure I will...... She is a really fast runner!!!  |
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Post by petalstream on Mar 21, 2010 11:32:21 GMT -5
can you please use complete scentences in personality and a bit mnore discription in looks go into depth please other then that it looks good.
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Post by natalie on Mar 25, 2010 17:56:04 GMT -5
Name: Crystalpaw Rank: apprentice Gender: Female age: 6 moons Picture: www.innocentenglish.com/funny-pic....gray-kitten.jpglooks: Crystal paw has light gray fur with white paws and white whiskers. She has a pink nose and a white tip on her tail. She also has bright blue eyes with a mischievous glint. Crysatlpaw is very pretty. personality: Crystalpaw is very mischievous but is loved by all her fellow apprentices. She is also very quick witted, loves to run, she's friendly and just loves life. Crystalpaw cant wait to become a warrior. History: She has a habbit of getting in to mischief and going exploring when no ones looking. Very recently made an apprentice and is excited about sleeping in a new den. She will still snuggle up to her other 2 litter mates though. Clan : Snow Clan Other: I want to have fun which I'm sure I will...... She is a really fast runner!!! |
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Post by Rika The Chair on Mar 30, 2010 18:48:54 GMT -5
Personality needs to be one more sentence long, and so does History.
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Post by natalie on Apr 1, 2010 1:58:23 GMT -5
i thought they were longer than one sentence but i added to them anyway just in case. Name: Crystalpaw Rank: apprentice Gender: Female age: 6 moons Picture: www.innocentenglish.com/funny-pic....gray-kitten.jpglooks: Crystal paw has light gray fur with white paws and white whiskers. She has a pink nose and a white tip on her tail. She also has bright blue eyes with a mischievous glint. Crysatlpaw is very pretty. personality: Crystalpaw is very mischievous but is loved by all her fellow apprentices. She is also very quick witted, loves to run, she's friendly and just loves life. Crystalpaw cant wait to become a warrior. She is very eager and enthusiastic which usually leads her to the heart of mischief. History: She has a habbit of getting in to mischief and going exploring when no ones looking. Very recently made an apprentice and is excited about sleeping in a new den. She will still snuggle up to her other 2 litter mates though. She is especially close to her littermates as their mother died at birth and their dad belongs to another clan. Clan : Snow Clan Other: I want to have fun which I'm sure I will...... She is a really fast runner!!!
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Post by Rika The Chair on Apr 1, 2010 21:46:10 GMT -5
Accepted
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Post by honyfur on Apr 2, 2010 17:39:20 GMT -5
well finally got it right
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Just email me who you are and I'll link you to my facebook page so we can friend each other and add you to the chat